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  • Alderyx
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    Thank you, I appreciate your recognition. Ill do my best so you will read my work again

  • Alderyx
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    Thank you for your warm welcome. And I also appreciate Miss Rhyme for receiving my intention upon writing this.

  • DepressingPoem
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    Welcome to the forum I look forward to seeing more.

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Alderyx Welcome to the zone!

    This captures what sounds like a lovely reunion.

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  • Alderyx
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    The first song ive made

    Spring is here, The flowers are blooming,
    Some plants bearin fruit,
    And now its hard to be choosin,
    Should i tell you what i feel inside But if i do,
    id be swallowing too much pride


    .
    On and on, for years too long,
    I've asked the same question,
    What if things go wrong,
    Sometimes you see me, worryin about something,
    But you don't ask, Those are one of the reasons,

    But now you're far away, Ive missed the timing,
    And i regret too much,
    For the wrong paths ive been choosing,
    But now I can't take it anymore,

    I'm coming to see you


    No matter where you are,
    No matter how far,
    I'll keep runnin, runnin, and runnin
    To catch a shooting star,
    It'll grant my wish,
    Cuz I want to meet you,
    No matter the era ,
    I'm coming to see you


    I saw you're message,
    You said you wanted to see me,
    It made me cry,
    its mutual , What the Both of us are feeling,
    It's been too long, since i last saw you
    , You said you would wait,
    At the place i first met you.


    I couldn't wait anymore,
    I dashed and even broke the door,
    I'm just too happy that you're back,
    That i didn't even realize,
    I've been running through the night,
    Passed an endless starry sky,
    I couldn't stop to look at the scenery,
    Cuz all i could care about, was to finally have you with me.


    No matter where you are,
    No matter how far,
    Ill keep runnin, runnin and runnin,
    To catch my shooting star,
    It'll grant my wish,
    Cuz i want to see you,
    No matter the era,
    I'm coming to meet you


    You were sitting beside,
    the shady tree,
    As i expected your beauty,
    Still fills me with glee,
    You called out to me,
    With a smile on your face,
    I wanted to act normal,
    So you won't see me as strange,


    Its been 10 years,
    Since we have met,
    I wanted to hold you close,
    but i resisted the urges ,
    But all i could do was to say,
    "Its great to see you again"
    What did i ran for? ,
    just to say this,
    It made me feel awkward,
    There was a moment of silence,
    But then you laughed,
    And said " I'm glad, you haven't changed"
    Its this smile, you're showing,
    That my feelings haven't changed,


    No matter where you are,
    No matter how far,
    Ill keep runnin, runnin, and runnin,
    But i still haven't caught that star,
    But It granted my wish,
    Cuz now that I'm with you,
    No matter the era I will always love you
    Last edited by Alderyx; 04-05-2022, 11:19 PM.
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