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    Tempting


    This raging torrent your look caused in me
    As a violent fire consumed me wildly
    Euphorically Floating Mindlessly
    Yes pushing me to follow you blindly


    a pout, the look of desire in your eyes
    Spontaneous laughter, flirtatious grin
    Unconsciously carried to my demise
    Engulfed with giddiness to touch your skin


    Lost in this fantasy that you’d be mine
    Within my grasp but so far out of reach
    Dreaming it’s possible to turn back time
    Expansive chasm determined to breach


    Reluctantly letting go of this dream
    Saving my pride and my torn soul redeem (R)


    By AlexandratheLate (R)

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    Originally posted by AlexandratheLate View Post
    Tempting


    This raging torrent your look caused in me
    As a violent fire consumed me wildly
    Euphorically Floating Mindlessly
    Yes pushing me to follow you blindly


    a pout, the look of desire in your eyes
    Spontaneous laughter, flirtatious grin
    Unconsciously carried to my demise
    Engulfed with giddiness to touch your skin


    Lost in this fantasy that you’d be mine
    Within my grasp but so far out of reach
    Dreaming it’s possible to turn back time
    Expansive chasm determined to breach


    Reluctantly letting go of this dream
    Saving my pride and my torn soul redeem (R)


    By AlexandratheLate (R)
    Beautiful and very intense. I love this, thanks. 😃

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you MissJ for reading, commenting and the like.

  • #3
    Thank you very much FixXxer for reading and the like.

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    • #4
      Thank you TS for reading and the like.

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      • #5
        MissJ. Oh, I agree totally! The sensuous quality of your versing AtL, is intense, inviting, and captivating, even when fanciful flirtation sound fit to spark a flame!

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        • #6
          Thank you for stopping by, reading and commenting. Thank you.

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          • #7
            Thank you for reading and the like The Kid in a cell.

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            • #8
              I totally agree !

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              • AlexandratheLate
                AlexandratheLate commented
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                Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it and WELCOME to the zone.

            • #9
              Hello Alexandra,
              Into the depths of a fantastical euphoria in this beautiful sonnet, composed with your unique flair for the romantic. Beguiling.

              Kind regards,
              Tony

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            • #10
              Thank you very much We Sound As One for the like.

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