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  • Namyh
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    The Second - Thanks a lot for tumbling over this way to enjoy this work. Namyh

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  • Namyh
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    RLW - So very happy you got here just in time for the flow, the tumbling and the motion. Kinda brings out the lovely in the day. Thanks so much RLW. Namyh

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  • Namyh
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    FixXxer - Understanding!,,,,,,.It's indeed a beautiful thing. Thanks for loving this. Now I will be "fabulously found forever fixated FixXxer". Thanks loads. Namyh

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  • Namyh
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    Alexandra - I thought that was you I saw in that forest looking around. Mighty glad you stopped in for the view my poet friend. Namyh

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  • Namyh
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    MissJ - Makes a poet scribbler mighty proud you "absolutely loved this". That puts a MissJ in my day. No poet could ask for more. Namyh

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    The same word came to mind for me as FixXxer - what great flow this has...nicely done!

    The title - with "Tumbling" set it up nicely - then the motion began...lovely!

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    This is so beautifully written my poet friend. I went into that forest and saw what you described. Just lovely. So many likes!!!

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  • FixXxer
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    Originally posted by Namyh View Post
    So if in Life his pen runs inkless, he can read how unrelinquished
    he once held his dreams extinctless blinks of tumbling stars.
    love the flow (of this part especially)


    Originally posted by Namyh View Post
    “To settle not for what you see but to envision what can be.”

    Once launched, they glint and glimmer, these Ideas now spectral hot,
    -poking free the mind’s detention
    -prompting Fate’s proclaim to mention
    -that Ideas cause Man’s ascension
    not his status, wealth or money, nor his claims of things he’s got.
    I feel we have a very strong understanding of each other. Love this message.

    Bravo! <3

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  • MissJ.
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    Originally posted by Namyh View Post
    The Tumbling Light

    In the deep, deep dark, my brain flashes sight
    -of a garden in a forest
    -where the trees sway in chorus
    -dropping tiny stars that flouresce
    and Ideas that hide in shadows reach to catch
    one tumbling light.


    They merge and link in combination, prodding Man’s imagination
    to write on tapestry weaved from birth all dreams and hopes thus far.
    So if in Life his pen runs inkless, he can read how unrelinquished
    he once held his dreams extinctless blinks of tumbling stars.


    For their divine inspiration is the heat that flames creation
    into making Man cross silvern stars which span the Heaven’s breach
    and from their brink back cosmic reach his hand outstretched with truth
    to teach: “To settle not for what you see but to envision what can be.”


    Once launched, they glint and glimmer, these Ideas now spectral hot,
    -poking free the mind’s detention
    -prompting Fate’s proclaim to mention
    -that Ideas cause Man’s ascension
    not his status, wealth or money, nor his claims of things he’s got.


    Namyh
    Hi, Namyh! I absolutely love this! It's brilliant and Inspired, and I do get it. Thanks so much for sharing this! 5 Stars! 😃

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  • Namyh
    started a topic The Tumbling Light

    The Tumbling Light

    The Tumbling Light

    In the deep, deep dark, my brain flashes sight
    -of a garden in a forest
    -where the trees sway in chorus
    -dropping tiny stars that flouresce
    and Ideas that hide in shadows reach to catch
    one tumbling light.


    They merge and link in combination, prodding Man’s imagination
    to write on tapestry weaved from birth all dreams and hopes thus far.
    So if in Life his pen runs inkless, he can read how unrelinquished
    he once held his dreams extinctless blinks of tumbling stars.


    For their divine inspiration is the heat that flames creation
    into making Man cross silvern stars which span the Heaven’s breach
    and from their brink back cosmic reach his hand outstretched with truth
    to teach: “To settle not for what you see but to envision what can be.”


    Once launched, they glint and glimmer, these Ideas now spectral hot,
    -poking free the mind’s detention
    -prompting Fate’s proclaim to mention
    -that Ideas cause Man’s ascension
    not his status, wealth or money, nor his claims of things he’s got.


    Namyh
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