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  • Three Hours after Dawn

    Three hours on
    Ribbon thin
    The snow
    Is melting.
    In a kind word
    It carries the sun's
    Heat in its heart till,
    Drop by drop
    A fence line,
    Becomes
    A Veil
    Of
    Steam
    Last edited by Johntee; 02-19-2022, 03:53 AM.

  • #2
    You are on a roll - just loving what you’re creating. Beautiful.

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    • #3
      Thanks Alex, I have to write quick before a favoured line drifts away. I guess inspiration is served in bursts, with the slogan "Get it while it's hot."

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      • #4
        Yes my fellow poet - keep going - I applaud you.

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        • #5
          Concur with both of your thoughts...the muses be fleeting and sometimes fickle!

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