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    Told my brother put that .40 to the back of my head,
    And to pull the trigger twice if I ever wanted him dead,
    Hope my mother forgive me for all the things that I said,
    And if she don't I'll collapse and put a knife to my neck,
    How can I live a normal life when I'm falling apart?
    I'm so scared to fall in love, don't want her breaking my heart,
    Never got to know love that's how I lived in the dark,
    So it's natural to run away when I feel it spark,

    Yours Truly,
    TKIAC

  • #2
    For me, your choice of closing, "Yours Truly, TKIAC" contrasts with the earlier violence in a way that strengthens the whole piece.

    It's like "BAM", followed up with "thank you very much".

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  • #3
    Our past affects us and our perceptions but when we know better, we do better. Great insight.

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