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    Tick tick tick and pop?

    I drink my problems away
    at the cost of my liver
    3 bottles a day
    you can cry me a river

    cuz i'm not gunna stop
    till I tick tick tick and pop

    my girlfriend left me
    I gave her hell
    her voice is still ringing
    I think I might yell

    but I'm still not gunna stop
    untill I tick tick tick and pop

    eviction notice
    car payments overdue
    that dude just punched me
    let my anger brew

    yet still I can not stop
    and then I tick tick tick and pop

    load up the gun
    and drive to the store
    the people keep laughing
    can't take it anymore

    and yet I couldn't stop
    so I ticked ticked ticked and popped

    the police arrived
    told me to stop
    and just as I had described
    they when't pop pop pop pop pop
    DepressingPoem
    Master in Training
    Last edited by DepressingPoem; 01-12-2022, 11:52 AM.

  • #2
    ...Is it just me or is that kinda catchy if you read it the 2nt time

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    • #3
      I have to read it twice?!?!

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      • #4
        jk DP

        It is catchy. And this isn't just some nobody saying that. I've got more than thirty years of listening to gansta rap on my resume. Fifteen-year-old me knew every word to every track on Straight Outta Compton.

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      • #5
        We're all going some way or another, aren't we?

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        • #6
          Originally posted by RhymeLovingWriter View Post
          We're all going some way or another, aren't we?
          Tru tho

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          • #7
            Depressing Poem - Your story pulled this reader in with a literary impact that was felt.....pop,pop,pop! Nice work DP. Namyh

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