Monochromatic

[Bry89 Master in Training Find all posts View Profile Close Bry89]

I can't deny
That this life
Is drab and meaningless

Always the chaos
And cruel darkness
But it's not always like this

My eyes were shut
And away from others
I preferred my own space

Now there's a light
Bright and unexpected
But life still has its shades of grey

Monochromatic visions
Everything seems so hollow, dark
But there's a line that divides
Between two states of emotion
Always look on the brighter side of life
But I still feel the thorns in my heart

Though there exists colour
For once in my life
I still view beauty
Through broken glass
I still dwell in the past

[RhymeLovingWriter Administrator Find all posts View Profile Close RhymeLovingWriter]

Ah...so this came before "Lines of Reality" then? Interesting how you progressed from one concept to the other.

[Bry89]

After, actually.

And that two have different backgrounds to them also (as this one is just based on not always viewing life in black and white).

[FixXxer Junior Member Find all posts View Profile Close FixXxer]

Monochromatic visions
Everything seems so hollow, dark
But there's a line that divides
Between two states of emotion
Always look on the brighter side of life
But I still feel the thorns in my heart

The whole thing is well written.. but i love this part a lot.. great work.

[Bry89]

Cheers!