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    Rukia- Ascending
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    broken alone abandoned forgotten
    lost in a sea of trouble's and worry
    no love care given unto me until she
    gave me joy and tears once more

    Lost in pain and found with love
    to her I owe my life and joy
    how do you repay such a deed
    by care support joy and friendship
    is that really enough to repay her
    for a life fixed the soul she saved

    no to her I owe my soul
    the fabric of myself I am hers
    from now till the end of time

    but am I worth enough
    can I give what I took away
    would I slow her from ascending

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    I thought I'd change up the writing a bit so I listened to music
    and didn't try to rhyme is the flow okay.. or less than okay


    If you don't mind let me know how it was
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  • #2
    This is one cool poem.

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    • DepressingPoem
      DepressingPoem commented
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      Thanks,


      (the rest of this message is to get 10 characters so i can hit post)
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