Lilac

[DepressingPoem]

little thoughts come out as knots
internal pain an invincible chain
love is an illusion incapable of fusion
archived dreams lost an unthinkable cost
collect there skulls senses life itself dulls

[FixXxer]

love the rhymes...

I do not think love needs to fuse.. it does not need to control.. it accepts what does not hurt it.
"Live and let live" combined with companionship.

great work

[DepressingPoem]

Looking over old poems for inspiration and now live and let die is playing in my head... Live and let live in contrast to live and let die isn't a bid idea

[FixXxer]

Looking over old poems for inspiration and now live and let die is playing in my head... Live and let live in contrast to live and let die isn't a bid idea

Sometimes, doing the same thing...but with different perspective works better.. I agree with that philosophy.. Great song as well

[RhymeLovingWriter]

I like the pictures your word choices make for me...knots...fusion...fashioned into a chain (weighing down), which contrasts completely with my notion of the LILAC (delicate & fragrant) acrostic...

Interesting.

[DepressingPoem]

Funny enough that was the goal.... You may have made my day with this comment Thanks