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  • DepressingPoem
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    Funny enough that was the goal.... You may have made my day with this comment Thanks

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    I like the pictures your word choices make for me...knots...fusion...fashioned into a chain (weighing down), which contrasts completely with my notion of the LILAC (delicate & fragrant) acrostic...

    Interesting.

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  • FixXxer
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    Originally posted by DepressingPoem View Post
    Looking over old poems for inspiration and now live and let die is playing in my head... Live and let live in contrast to live and let die isn't a bid idea
    Sometimes, doing the same thing...but with different perspective works better.. I agree with that philosophy.. Great song as well

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  • DepressingPoem
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    Looking over old poems for inspiration and now live and let die is playing in my head... Live and let live in contrast to live and let die isn't a bid idea

  • FixXxer
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    love the rhymes...

    I do not think love needs to fuse.. it does not need to control.. it accepts what does not hurt it.
    "Live and let live" combined with companionship.

    great work

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  • DepressingPoem
    started a topic Lilac

    Lilac

    little thoughts come out as knots
    internal pain an invincible chain
    love is an illusion incapable of fusion
    archived dreams lost an unthinkable cost
    collect there skulls senses life itself dulls

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