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    Filled by Emptiness

    A vacant smile departs from your lips
    As you look through empathy’s ego
    That deigns its humble hoax of care
    Fool filled with an absence of purpose

    Numb even to the numbness
    Emotion motionless drained of colour
    Drowning In the sweet embrace
    Of withdrawals lonely void

    Shrouded from hopes residue
    That he has changed
    A straw clutched until crushed
    He never will be redemptions son

    A self ordained unholy trinity
    Judge, jury and executioner
    You are Incarcerated in brutality
    A convict of his conviction

    Faint echo of your esteem
    Awakes, dormant courage, ignites belief
    Flickers of your spirit a rising phoenix
    As you walk away from a parasite

  • #2
    I... really really liked this one not sure what to say so just... good job \O-O\

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    • #3
      Thank you I really appreciate that

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      • #4
        Many cleverly turned phrases here, Jon, heavy with creative consonance...word choices match the mood perfectly. Kudos!

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        • #5
          Thank you I really appreciate that RhymeLovingWriter and DepressingPoem

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          • #6
            Really enjoyed pp thank you

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            • #7
              The second thank you

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