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  • Vision

    prob one of my favs that I’ve written. I would love some feed back on areas I could improve, so if anyone reading could give some tips, that would be great.

    I’m not into fakes
    Looking at your raps, that’s all you are
    I know the stakes, I go for the heart
    Pull on the strings, maniacally dark,
    I’mma puppet master, a king of sorts
    Playing you like a violin
    I promise I’ll be gentle, 
I don’t like violence
    Cos it makes no sense
    I’d rather violate
    myself, my head,
    these thoughts gonna give me, my death,
    So I try to, avoid em and drown em//
    Ignore em and doubt em//
    Put em down and burry em,
    But then they come up like skeletons
    But they don’t stay in my closet,
    The get up in, my face, my space,
    Need room, misplaced, my keys,
    No escape, these mistakes,
    Cloud my mind and extradite
    Things I can’t control, all lies
    I love dark pink morning skies
    I love thinking why?
    Doubting thoughts, getting lost
    In my maze, thinking I forgot
    To cross some T’s
    And I’d some dots
    What’s that mean?
    I forgot
    Uh oh
    There I go again
    Uh oh
    This that way I get
    Uh oh
    Its that time again
    What time?
    Lemme tell you when
    It’s when imma win
    And take charge over my thoughts
    And show my demons I’m the boss
    Tell them to shut up, countering their shots
    Then watch them flop, call them floundering
    Because I’m on top, and I’ll be the one
    Devouring, now they’re cowering
    Guess they didn’t know
    I could get this way
    Well now they know,
    And they’re terrified
    The tables have turned
    But that aside
    Tears were shed
    Panic’s attacked, many times, but I survived
    So now am trying
    To recapture my eyes
    Cos I lost em way back
    Back when I tried
    To ignore all the bad
    Which resulted in
    Going blind, but now I see again
    Moving forward
    Finally got a vision