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    Comfort foods

    there’s burgers and noodles and fries
    there’s pasta and ramen in disguise
    cakes and crumpets follow all in line
    cookies gathered beautiful by design
    chocolate chips and mac and cheese
    ice cream slightly melted after a freeze

    then if you’re up for a special treat
    make something really sweet
    if you’re up for a challenge * don't cower*
    make noodles but make them really sour
    if you want jerky but not to bother and pay
    make some at home your own new way'

    cooking can be comfort or could be a fear
    but the food you make you should hold near
    it shows your feeling its more than a vent
    because you can eat it and maybe pay rent
    as a good friend showed me a while ago
    cooking is a vent a hobby and also a show

    Cooking doesn’t have to be showy or bright
    the flavor doesn’t always have to be right
    over time you have recipes that shows you grow
    as a person sometimes the road is slow
    and when the roads both slow and crude
    then you get to make your comfort food




    By: DepressedPoet


    Note/Question: Why am I even a little proud of this?
    Last edited by DepressingPoem; 03-07-2021, 04:13 PM.

  • #2
    This made me hungry! lol Overall it is a good poem. It moves well, stays on topic and it is fun to read. There are a few rhymes that feel a bit forced to me though. But that is hard to avoid in a poem with that kind of rhyming scheme.

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    • DepressingPoem
      DepressingPoem commented
      Editing a comment
      I'm ina good mood when I cook and I wondered why.. but i got of track and ended up with this

  • #3
    Was fun to make

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    • #4
      I don't know why you're a little proud of this, but that's definitely a problem.

      You should be a lot proud, or at least regular proud. It's good stuff. Thanks for putting in the work and sharing it.

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      • #5
        Originally posted by Poldy View Post
        I don't know why you're a little proud of this, but that's definitely a problem.

        You should be a lot proud, or at least regular proud. It's good stuff. Thanks for putting in the work and sharing it.
        Thanx you

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        • #6
          I agree! This is a good read.

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          • #7
            amazing what comes from positivity and being hungry

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            • #8
              I found this fun to read, DP. Keep on cooking (writing poetry, that is) and feeding the Rhymezone poets!

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