The weight of its branches slammed the cedar
The angry Oak tried to choke its neighbor
causing a reaction, crackle, snap, crash
The Cedar twisted around the oaks limbs
Bringing them down, tangling with its own
Silhouetted against the afternoon
Their bare arms collapsed into each other
They thrashed all day, into the night hours
While whispers rose from misty blades of grass
Who will prevail in this foolish battle?
The bright moon had to turn its face away
Debris dropped heavily into the mud
The owls pleaded for the great minds to stop
In the great forest are battling trees
Who can know the things they think?
The great forest holds chaotic matters
Humming, the Earth asks for more
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So I highlighted a line that I like, but I feel is in the way of my pattern. What do you guys advise?
The angry Oak tried to choke its neighbor
causing a reaction, crackle, snap, crash
The Cedar twisted around the oaks limbs
Bringing them down, tangling with its own
Silhouetted against the afternoon
Their bare arms collapsed into each other
They thrashed all day, into the night hours
While whispers rose from misty blades of grass
Who will prevail in this foolish battle?
The bright moon had to turn its face away
Debris dropped heavily into the mud
The owls pleaded for the great minds to stop
In the great forest are battling trees
Who can know the things they think?
The great forest holds chaotic matters
Humming, the Earth asks for more
-----
So I highlighted a line that I like, but I feel is in the way of my pattern. What do you guys advise?
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