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    Blue

    blue is the deep ocean ready to be explored
    the color blue is the feeling after the sword
    blue is their eyes deep and mysterious
    the eyes that can be harsh and serious
    blue the feeling that comes time and again
    when your numb and have no useable brain
    blue is the sky farther and vaster than most know
    blue is my heart with a dead layer of snow

    By: DepressedPoet

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  • #2
    Copy cat??

    im kidding, good work

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    • DepressingPoem
      DepressingPoem commented
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      UwU I googled fun poem ideas while bored and it popped up Lol

  • #3
    blue is their eyes deep and mysterious
    the eyes that can be harsh and serious

    Hey, something about these two lines stand out to me. They seem to flow nicely, I'd play with those words a little more. Maybe see how many poems are hidden in those lines.

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