Past Present Future

[DepressingPoem]

Past:

The past is doomed to repeat
wondering how to retreat
becouse now life is just a ring
to go around unable to do anything
the past memories to escape
lets say it left quite a scrape

The past has a habbit of comeing back
always be on guard ready for the attack
start to wonder why i'm always so insain
wonder why I mussle throught the pain

Present:

Theres always something missing
try to pet a cat and it starts hissing
try to make a friend or find a place to vent
but there hurt more I can tank the dent
always have a wound always dripping blood
always act ok like a firework but always a dud

The present is pain just like my life
who cares if there's an end to the strife
choose to play the idiot the fool
becouse in the end i'm no jewel

Future:

Not sure if i'll have one no sure i'll last
but it better not be like the past
it better have time to heal my wound
otherwise I know i'll be doomed
there better be a life worth fighting
there the time to proove the hills worth climbing


The past should break its habbit of comeing back
found no need ot be on guard ready for no attack
stoped wondering why I was always so insain
learnd how to stop mussleing throught the pain

By: DepressedPoet

[Parkinsonspoet]

You have in the past asked for feedback and this is another poem that I very much like the premise. Past is doomed to repeat is a great opening lline and keeping the same format for the present and future gives a repeated structure without overdoing the repetition.

There is opportunity here though more things to consider including the tense.

The past was doomed to repeat
wondered how to retreat
becouse now life just a ring
Went around unable to do anything
Past memories to escape
lets say it left quite a scrape

The past has a habbit of coming back
I' m always on guard, ready for the attack
Started wondering why I'm always so insane
Wondered why I mussled through the pain

Having this referring back more in past tense makes it more certain as we are sayin it happened rather than is happening. It has also allowed the stripping of a few surplus words.
We could change things slightly in your middle section to have it more consistently refering to the present and the final one more to the future.

[DepressingPoem]

Hmm I didn't think to much about that.