Her song

[DepressingPoem]

The song of true peace
makeing life bright and loveing
causing tears of joy

hear her call echo
feel her loving words surround
gental as the wind

at times lost within
yet enough to clear the path
to start what is next

as an apple falls
from the leafs of fate frozen
onto the fresh snow

By: DepressedPoet

[Parkinsonspoet]

Nice. I like that

[marce lolopes]

Very cool, I like

[DepressingPoem]

Ok not to be mean to anyone but the first thang that came to mind looking at your comments was "Wow people here really are descriptive" In a sarcastic tone and I found it ironic so here I am writeing my thoughts.

[DepressingPoem]

I mean thing...

[SpotDog04]

Very nice. The only thing I noticed was a few spelling errors (making, loving, gentle, leaves). Of course, this could've been done on purpose, so I suppose this is simply a suggestion. Anyways, great job!

[DepressingPoem]

altho I suck as spelling I looked at this from a child point of view
like listening to a lullaby