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  • Her song

    The song of true peace
    makeing life bright and loveing
    causing tears of joy

    hear her call echo
    feel her loving words surround
    gental as the wind

    at times lost within
    yet enough to clear the path
    to start what is next

    as an apple falls
    from the leafs of fate frozen
    onto the fresh snow

    By: DepressedPoet

  • #2
    Nice. I like that

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    • #3
      Very cool, I like

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      • #4
        Ok not to be mean to anyone but the first thang that came to mind looking at your comments was "Wow people here really are descriptive" In a sarcastic tone and I found it ironic so here I am writeing my thoughts.

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        • #5
          I mean thing...

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          • #6
            Very nice. The only thing I noticed was a few spelling errors (making, loving, gentle, leaves). Of course, this could've been done on purpose, so I suppose this is simply a suggestion. Anyways, great job!

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            • DepressingPoem
              DepressingPoem commented
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              altho I suck as spelling I looked at this from a child point of view
              like listening to a lullaby
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