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    FACE

    PLUMP
    ROUND, LOVELY AND SWEET
    HEAVEN is glued blue
    WANTING
    UNDISCOVERED, UNOPENED
    NO ONE CARES
    Outside the storm
    Candle wax drips onto the ribs
    Treasures hiding beneath the waves
    Walkway between houses
    Window light dim
    The moon
    Always a new phase
    Wolves and creatures unnatural
    Hypocrites bathe
    Innocence is washed away every day
    Lift the knife hand
    Carve the past and pleasure
    Redeem the value of memory
    I will see in
    One way or another
    Comedy, where is your medicine?
    Platform, where is your steadiness?
    Human, where is your remedy?
    Dreamer
    Where is your face?

    RDS
    THE SECOND

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    This is a moving piece, TS. I think the dreamers are there...hope never disappears entirely. New shrouds work at obfuscation, but poetry such as yours holds reveal. Never stop writing.

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