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    Inside, slipped from heart-on-sleeve,

    do you believe in truths unseen -

    held fast with eyes of faith?


    No reasoned data, graphed to show

    what only intuition holds as truth,

    erasing doubt.


    Without - a sounded sigh.


    Within - a gloried cry, “Thy Will be done as You decree!”


    When seizing breath of brother-kin,

    will we begin to understand

    His hand as dealt and dealing?


    Kneeling fast at death-tide door,

    do not ignore...this, too, has been allowed.


    Un-crowd restricting pound-of-pride.

    Allow inside, humility.


    In space where greatness

    true-admits its source,

    no force on earth can

    make a difference more


    than one man,


    holding

    fast to

    Love.

  • #2
    I really like this It flowed nicely as I read it and worked so well. It is a poem that suits your lightness of touch.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you Jon. Good to hear from you!

  • #3
    RhymeZone Forums was extremely important to me. When I joined the site – in April 2016 – I was truly humbled that so much talent would accept a Simple Rhymer. However, a few months ago I decided to pull away due to – what I felt – was an abundance of SPAM postings and comments.

    Recently, I was asked to become a Moderator to assist the other Moderators – and Administrators - in combating these SPAM postings and comments. It was my honor to enthusiastically accept.

    I pledge to take the time to review the site daily (multiple times) and take appropriate action when necessary. I thank you for your contributions, and if you are considering withdrawing your talents – or have already done so – I sincerely hope you will reconsider.

    My email address is [email protected] if you have any concerns regarding material posted to RhymeZone Forums.

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    • #4
      BobGrantKC thank you...thank you...and thank you.

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      • #5
        Actually my great RhymeZone Friend - Thank you to infinity and beyond!!!!

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