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  • My honor

    MY HONOR

    Sometimes the little fish
    Get to eat the big fish
    Bit by bit
    While they stay put
    Sleeping in the deep, lazy
    Fat bellies filled cozy with comfort
    Lap of luxury, aquamarine
    Smuckered in pearl jam
    Slapping the hard candy of informants
    The runway will never be the same
    I won’t remember why I died

    RDS
    THE SECOND

  • #2
    Nice first and last three lines Actually all of them are pretty cool, but those stood out even more to me. Perhaps this is a poem on Reincarnation...

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    • The second
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      thanks am glad you liked not reincarnation hope you are safe

  • #3
    Likely, you won't care either. Wonderful poem, TS.

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    • The second
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      it is very nice to hear from you rlw thank you for your notes p.s i cant get into my message center hope you can help hope you are safe

    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      I don't think I can help with that. Perhaps try sending a note to one of the admins?

    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      I tried sending you a message to see if I'd get anything returned. Nothing so far. Perhaps go into your profile and click the "Edit Settings" on the left hand column under your picture, and check the options on every tab to see if anything has been changed? I wish I could do more.
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