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    Stay the Stars


    Still the wind.

    Stay the Stars in their traces

    and of eternity while time stands

    pray the night the garden graces

    and finding the cup run full

    sup it to its bitter lees

    or tempted call

    what would

    not be named

    but come in flame

    to sever souls, Azrael.

  • #2
    bump, the flow of this drew me in (again) and the second time was sweeter. thanks for sharing. i love the ending--

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    • #3
      Just WOW Johntee . As grant hayes used to say - top drawer!

      Plus, I learned a new definition of 'lee'. Gotta' love it.

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      • #4
        Thank you both, as with a lot i write this grew from a single line "Stay the Stars in their Traces" which I felt sure came from William Blake and lent itself something along the lines of his religious imagery. Google disagreed and preferred various TV combinations of Stars and Without a Trace.

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