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    a meditation in stone

    lack of features
    silhouettes floating
    on water;
    bags filled with
    more
    water, filled with
    sunlight's liquid.

    it comes
    like honey dripping
    down the sides
    of the mountain,
    as we watch it fall
    inside of our soul.

    i can't even quite tell
    how this
    impossible
    meditation in stone
    was made to be,
    or meant for me to
    show you -- what?

    the question
    is broken open,
    and, left with
    this certitude,

    I am certain
    of nothing.

    which leads to
    one more
    question

    against a backdrop
    of beady silence
    as the eyelids stir...

    back to life.

  • #2
    This has a circular feel as I read it aloud; movement, thought the meditation is in stone. Interesting...enjoyable. So good to see you posting again. Happy New Year!

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    • #3
      ello RLW... So, thanks for your comment. I had that juxtaposition in mind, like the concept of the Weeping Angel... Or how I think about it...
      If you make a statue believable enough to be real, is it reality just standing still? Or if you could convince someone that whenever they look away the statue turns back to stone, and all along it was really just moving until you looked at it Like a poem never written.

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      • #4
        Excellent as always

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        • #5
          Chiselled
          from a fluid
          flow the tongue abets
          yet a questionable uncertainty
          awaits still the eye
          that must descry

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