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  • The Swallows Flight

    Where lives the sun the swallow flies,
    his home on wing in endless sky,
    here swoops and sports the summer through
    with love of life as I love you.

    Yet what is he without the sun
    to warm and feed 'til summers done,
    he knows by season he is bound
    as south he flies at Autumns round.

    And what am I without your love,
    you are my sun set bright above,
    for like that swallow in the sky
    without loves warmth my heart would die.
    Last edited by algernon; 12-29-2019, 03:59 AM.

  • #2
    This has a clean lovely feeling, a joy to read it!


    • #3
      Thank you LG. Much appreciated


      • #4
        A delicate piece of simile
        all bound within the sheltering sky,
        the heart, the swallow, the swallowed fly.
        brings down to Earth its symmetry.
        Last edited by Johntee; 01-02-2020, 07:30 AM.


        • #5
          Thanks for reading and commenting Johntee


          • #6
            Lovely algernon !


            • #7
              Thank you so much RLW


              • #8

                When a person boasts that he will not change his beliefs, he undertakes to go in a straight line all the time - this is a moron, confident in his infallibility. There are no principles, but events; no laws - there are circumstances; a man of high flight himself is trying on events and circumstances to guide them.


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