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    COMING HOME

    With mouths so dry
    It’s hard to speak in our dreams
    Especially ones dealing with the past
    Forgotten love and young faces
    The car ride had nothing to do with where we were heading
    Except I remember you said we were coming home

    RDS
    THE SECOND

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    Second - Made me think of those bits of forgotten remembrances which sometimes erupt in our dreams. Nicely done. Thanks Second for the memories and for sharing. Namyh

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    • #3
      That fifth line...so ripe with possibilities...I wonder if it's meant as literal or metaphorical? I'm a literal thinker and writer the majority of the time, but that line captures my imagination and makes me wonder... It's a good feeling, to wonder at things. Thank you TS. Your musings never disappoint.

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