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    My eyes become consumed by this subject
    My soul feels an inner connection

    Goosebumps emerge...
    Inside, a warm overwhelming feeling emerges
    It touches me enclosing me inside a seal
    Knees pulled inside my breasts
    I am sold by a natural feeling of right, cradling me

    Thinking back,..
    Peering into the mirror it replays those feelings
    Making a giggle emanate from within
    I can't wait to be touched again..
    Reminiscent I begin to fantasize
    Trees burning, but no forest fire just a little relaxation for the mind
    Thoughts come forth hitting me sequentially
    When the record spins and the musical notes encircle my coke bottle shaped figure,
    It feels so euphoric and I yearn for the next ensemble
    Fairy tails that come to life in my mind
    It's my own slice of momental paradise
    Suspended in time.., won't you come and experience it with me
    Even for just one more time?

    The senses heighten with you
    Mother protecting her child, arms open for the loved one
    But fire shoots from within at any who wish to harm or antagonize this special something I have in my possession
    The genie in my bottle precious and fragile

    Dare touch my love..
    And thy shall wish to seek my wrath silent, but deadly thy will see

    A love crazy, majestic, and unique
    But not thwarted by any, but the one I surrender to
    I can be slain by this special one, but no other metaphorically speaking
    My spirit strong, Excalibur
    A solid thing..
    I adore my humility
    It's only a natural humanistic type of thing

    Trees sway and wolves howl
    Dogs bark and felines purr
    It's a simplistic nature that is always more intricate then it seems
    Deceptive, but sweet
    A sophisticated life of a mind of two
    Thinking for we

  • #2
    Love is tender, love is strong. Very nice, Jazzy!


    • Jazzy G
      Jazzy G commented
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      Thanks! I shot for a different type of poem this time around. Expanding my topics and trying to go out on a limb in a different type of light.

  • #3
    I feel this. The words seem to get to me before I even have a chance to read them.

    Cradled by a feeling, embraced by music, the life of a mind and the things to it most dear, that you invite in and will fight to keep. I want this every day I think.

    These are good things. I can understand why you adore your humility.


    • Jazzy G
      Jazzy G commented
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      Appreciate your read! Glad you enjoyed. As I mentioned to Muttado1sb this was a different type of poem for me. I stray from sharing these more or less emotional poems, but I figure its time to expand my repertoire. And yes in response to the humility, it is a different type of acceptance. Thankz again!

  • #4
    "I could bow down and feel proud in the light of this power"

    From "The Most Beautiful Girl in the World" by Prince

    I knew this poem was reminding me of something. Good company to be in, I'd say.


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