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    Hello. I would like to share my second finished poem in English. Thank you in advance for your criticism.

    Not every planet orbits a star,
    Not every river flows into the sea.
    Winged by a dream we can get very far,
    Never look back but we always should see.
    Pointers here and there
    Pointers everywhere.

    Hour hands and children run before eyes,
    Poles with the numbers pile up in a mind,
    But a sunrise never stops to surprise
    Those who're awake, who remember to find
    Pointers here and there
    Pointers everywhere.

    Life is like playing chess in the dark,
    Waits as a mirror the world for your act,
    Makes every footprint and each fingermark
    Glazed by the gold-sand of time and intact
    Pointers here and there
    Pointers everywhere.

  • #2
    Nicely done Andy! You've been away for awhile. Welcome back to the zone!

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    • #3
      Originally posted by RhymeLovingWriter View Post
      Nicely done Andy! You've been away for awhile. Welcome back to the zone!
      Thank you!

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      • #4
        I enjoyed this Andy.

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