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    I speak the words
    But the sound is empty
    I shout my pain
    But no one can hear
    I scream my sorrow
    But my voice is silent
    I talk through silence
    But mu pain is still here
    I ask the forbidding questions
    But nothing ever answers
    I fight the darkness
    But is always comes back
    I cry my tears
    But nothing ever fixes
    I try to make it through
    But the pain is to strong

    You try to hear a sound
    But the only voice is silence
    You cry for me
    But you don't know your pain
    You fight to keep me safe
    But safety is like mist
    You ask me to confess
    But the truth is sealed
    You talk to me about my fear
    But all you hear is lies
    You scream to calm your sorrows
    But it still arises
    You shout your fear for me
    But all my pain continues
    You speak my poet words
    But I'm still not heard
    Last edited by PotterHead22807; 09-27-2019, 06:31 PM.

  • #2
    A typo
    (But mu pain is still here
    But the pain is to strong)
    and a missing "o"
    It's good to see you post again

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    • #3
      You've been heard here poet. I agree with JT - good to see you posting again!

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      • #4
        Thanks so much. I haven’t been posting because o haven’t had much inspiration.

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        • RhymeLovingWriter
          RhymeLovingWriter commented
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          I know that feeling too some days. Write anyway. Sometimes the most mundane things can spark creativity. It's good to hear your voice in the zone.

        • Johntee
          Johntee commented
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          As RLW says, the mundane can generate surprises;
          see where a single word can lead

      • #5
        Originally posted by PotterHead22807 View Post
        I speak the words
        But the sound is empty
        I shout my pain
        But no one can hear
        I scream my sorrow
        But my voice is silent
        I talk through silence
        But mu pain is still here
        I ask the forbidding questions
        But nothing ever answers
        I fight the darkness
        But is always comes back
        I cry my tears
        But nothing ever fixes
        I try to make it through
        But the pain is to strong

        You try to hear a sound
        But the only voice is silence
        You cry for me
        But you don't know your pain
        You fight to keep me safe
        But safety is like mist
        You ask me to confess
        But the truth is sealed
        You talk to me about my fear
        But all you hear is lies
        You scream to calm your sorrows
        But it still arises
        You shout your fear for me
        But all my pain continues
        You speak my poet words
        But I'm still not heard
        It`s beautiful

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