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  • Beautiful Dreamer

    I didn’t want to wake you
    You looked so peaceful
    so innocent
    lying there
    I remembered your beauty
    I remembered your truth
    your majesty
    your love
    I remembered being happy
    And I smiled
    But I also remembered the rest

  • #2
    Kind of ends with a "rude awakening", hmmm?

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      A kick of some kind, for sure. Thank you, RLW!

  • #3
    Yeah the good times and the others. nice remembering, well done friend.
    Regards.

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    • Muttado1sb
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      Thank you, Cari!

  • #4
    Muttado1sb , like most loving relationships the good times dominated your verse. To me, what I read is : the other times are an afterthought. I think this is a beautiful write.

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    • Muttado1sb
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      I wouldn’t have expected you to read it any other way, Bobby! Thanks!
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