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  • I Had A Friend

    This i s just a poem!!!!! It has no basis in reality! Lol! "I JUST BE WRITIN' $#!T!!!!!!!" Lol!

    I HAD A FRIEND

    I had a friend
    But he got shot
    He was alive
    But now he's not

    We used to laugh,
    Joke, Drink ---- Smoke Pot
    And many other things
    I've since forgot

    They buried him in
    An unmarked plot
    But I always seem
    To find the spot

    I miss my FRIEND
    An awful lot
    Now I'm the ONLY
    Friend I've got

  • #2
    I wouldn't have thought someone could make something humorous out of this situation (even contrived), but your tongue-in-cheek rhyming has definitely pushed it in that direction. I'm glad the inspiration is made-up though.

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    • Rhymeboy
      Rhymeboy commented
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      Thanks for commenting RLW. This poem is an excerpt from an 'NIP' (a Novel in Progress)

    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Wow - you're working on a novel too! Inspirational!

    • Rhymeboy
      Rhymeboy commented
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      Yes RLW I have many NIP's My poems are often concise versions of novels I would like to write

  • #3
    The willow weeps
    where only ragged
    gravestones sleep

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    • Rhymeboy
      Rhymeboy commented
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      Thanks for commenting Johntee. Its always nice to have you stop by. The Weeping Willow is my favorite tree I have a 'NIP' about a Willow tree as well! But I feel it may be too sad to publish! Lol!

  • #4
    Rhymeboy - From personal experience, this was a sad and well crafted work. It goes straight to the heart and stays there vibrating the memories. It takes the power of the poet's pen to do that and you did RB. Namyh

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    • Rhymeboy
      Rhymeboy commented
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      Thank you Namyh Your well crafted comments are always inspirational

  • #5
    While it is not based on a personal reality, you know it happens all too often. A smile in the sadness, Rhymeboy.

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    • Rhymeboy
      Rhymeboy commented
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      So true! Thanks for stopping by Muttado1sb!!!!! Long time no see!
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