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    Lucky Ones

    A little rhyme
    has poked its toe
    into my space for work
    and so...

    I typed it quick
    to post away
    and then return
    to work today.

    Oh wait. You say
    that rhyme's my game?
    In that case, then,
    it's all the same.

    If you have work
    you count as fun
    I'd peg us both
    as lucky ones.





    Hoping to bring a little smile to your face. Did it work?

  • #2
    It worked for me

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Happy to hear it Jon! Thanks for letting me know!

  • #3
    Yes it worked!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Yea! Thanks for letting me know.

  • #4
    I like this, every single word has to earn its place. the result is not a forced rhyming word anywhere. Good work.
    Regards John.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you John. Hopefully I"m learning better how not to force rhyme. I like when it sings itself into my heart and all I have to do is write it down! Thanks for taking time to leave a note!

  • #5
    This little piggy went to the market
    to poke its little nose
    Went looking for a place to park it
    found humor in Paula’s prose 😊

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      And your response has me smiling as well Bobby!

  • #6
    What is there left
    when luck runs out.
    The shoe on the post
    needs turnabout
    To write for joy
    Oh what a gift
    to give the gloomy
    world a lift.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      More and more that seems my lot - and a welcome one it is JT - welcome indeed.

  • #7
    I’m a little late to your game, but I am smiling!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Yea! Wonderful to hear that - thanks for letting me know!
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