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    Just a note about a phenomenon happening where young men in their 20’s are dating and marrying women in their 40’s and this poem is about a friend of mine in her 40’s dating a young man in his 20’s. I wrote about some of her expressions hope you enjoy it.



    Her Young Lover


    She became the blank canvas painted with your love
    Your heart was the holy grail she had tried to find
    Tender, lively so young and eager to respond
    You saw not only her face but her heart and mind


    “The years between us melted when you smiled at me
    I could see my steel convictions starting to wane
    There was such an innocent sensuality
    Enveloping my heart, begging me to remain”


    Desperately wanting to turn back the hands of time
    Tears of frustration and hopelessness poured like rain
    So she Whispered her secrets to the wind sublime
    for she was old but he was only in his prime


    By AlexandratheLate (R)
    Last edited by AlexandratheLate; 07-21-2019, 05:59 PM.

  • #2
    I also have a friend experiencing the same phenomenon. You covered nicely Alexandra👍🌹

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  • #3
    Alexandra
    Nice way you handle the subject matter. too bad we are attracted and chase relations that are not sustainable for long... Sad. The way you use your rhyme is nice and flows effortless. Do I detect an "anapestic rhythm"? xxX xxX xxX

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      I have mixed feelings about that and know such a relationship is not for me because of the practicalities you just mentioned. This phenomenon is strange but interesting.
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