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  • Jazzy G
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    No problem and thanks 4 the welcome. I appreciate ya!

  • Rhymeboy
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    Thanks for commenting on my poem,fasteel!!!!! I appreciate your time and I look forward to interacting with you in the future!!!! And by the way . . .Welcome to The Zone!!!!!

  • Rhymeboy
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    Thanks again,RLW!!!!!

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Glad I could help!

  • fasteel
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    Rhymeboy

    I can see the obvious analogy here to the sad plight of the African slave. Sad. I like the way you have the rhythm beeat back and forth with the verses cut byb the pause of the periods. Nice.

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  • Rhymeboy
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    Thank you RhymeLovingWriter!!!!!!!! You're a lifesaver!

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  • Rhymeboy
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    Thank you AtL! I appreciate you stopping by to comment!

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Sorry it took me a couple of days until I logged on and saw your response. Should be fine now.

  • AlexandratheLate
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    I like this style of poetic storytelling. Nicely done.

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  • Rhymeboy
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    Yes RhymeLovingWriter Please do! Please fix them!!! I would appreciate that! 'clouds' in 3rd stanza 3rd line. 'placed' in 11th stanza 4th line.Thank You!!

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  • Rhymeboy
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    Jazzy G . . . Nice graduation photo by the way!!

  • Rhymeboy
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    Yes RLW!!!! Please do! I would appreciate that! 'clouds' in 3rd stanza 3rd line. 'placed' in 11th stanza 4th line.Thank You!!!

  • Rhymeboy
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    Thank You very much Jazzy G for your very kind words . . . and Welcome to The Zone! I look forward to interacting with you many more times in the future!!!!!!

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    I can fix those for you if you'd like.

  • Jazzy G
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    Sweet way of wording, this very good poem in my opinion! I like the way it makes you think beautiful thoughts and indeed makes you feel caged as the story continues into that cage. Well put together!

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