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    At ends, I am.

    Loose, and oddly so.

    I couldn’t know how

    change would

    rearrange old habits.


    Yet, it has.


    Each passing fancy

    sandwiched neatly now

    between our fair and dwindling

    daily must-be-dones.


    It comes,

    surprising me at every turn.


    I yearn to share these

    little bits of knowledge

    and I find you gone

    from where I most-expectant

    saw your face.


    Embracing & eschewing

    with a waltz-like turn besides,

    I do not hide the tears

    erupting from my face.


    And then they’re dry,

    replaced by hope and

    light of breathing still.


    It will be well, this all

    which looses me

    before it binds again.

  • #2
    Tying up lose ends, beautifully done.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks divot - for taking a look and leaving a sweet comment.

  • #3
    Photography and Poetry Collaborations
    My new favorite art form
    Im assuming you’re reflecting on your loved
    ones who have passed. Evocative write Paula

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      I do believe it was you that inspired the idea - so thank you for that. You are spot on in your assumption also. The days are getting better because I can move past the sad moments, remembering and looking forward. Thank you Bobby, for stopping by and leaving such a nice note!

  • #4
    Lovely piece . . . with a very sweet construction! Well done as always RhymeLovingWriter! I haven't been on The Zone in a while . . . I'm glad to see one of your marvelous posts

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you Rhymeboy! Wonderful to see your name as well...hopefully we'll both be returning with more regularity in the future!

  • #5
    This beautifully done - so many likes. Coming to terms is an ongoing process.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you Alex! You are so right...it is a daily, ongoing, process of growth. Thank you for this comment.

  • #6
    There are some really beautiful and comforting turns in this one. I enjoyed it very much.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you LG. I appreciate your saying so! I pray all is well for you today too.
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