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  • Dream Killer

    Your thoughts
    Your aspirations
    Your future
    As you sleep

    Your fear
    Your hidden fear
    Your nightmares
    End of your dreams

    Your pain
    Your own worries
    Dormant emotion
    While you sleep

    Your mind
    Reawaken its fear
    Your impending death
    When I take your dreams

  • #2
    O I like the end, reminds me of a poem I've written. I thought maybe insert "in" instead of "its" on the third to last line last stanza. So it would read, "reawaken in fear". Kind of a cool word play sticking out to me, thanks for sharing!

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    • #3
      This speaks a heavy load, a bit frightening as reality.

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      • Bry89
        Bry89 commented
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        Yes, you can say that
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