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  • amenOra
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    This brought with it a variety of ways of looking at it// sensations... familiarity! "Deep," you know? What I most was affected by was the bit of solemnness towards the end, makes me feel like greeting you an old friend, with the recognition of the impermanence. A lungful of pathos Thanks for sharing with us.

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Love it! It's...refreshing.

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  • Johntee
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    Rain worn stone
    elements in
    transition

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  • divot
    started a topic Older then rain, you must be rock

    Older then rain, you must be rock

    Drink deep

    Spring rains will not last

    That shapes the earth

    And scours paths

    Sing mountain

    With gurgle and rush


    Trapped within a forest glen

    Your creek that winds

    Leads back within

    To question both just where and when

    As meadows wait

    Won’t hesitate


    Leafy veins, hitch a ride

    Come along down mountain side

    At journeys end to reside

    And sink in valley pool

    Drink deep old friend

    While I stay


    Sharp the tongue

    That tames the peak

    Pitter patter, pitter patter

    Softly speaks

    And takes the edge off

    Stern relief’s


    Drink mountain
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