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  • pitter-patter

    the dark from
    last night hangs
    over the flower

    &

    it
    rained
    without
    me knowing
    Last edited by amenOra; 05-08-2019, 08:27 AM.

  • #2
    Oh, I like this.

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    • amenOra
      amenOra commented
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      I went through a few iterations and edits with this, and I also like the finished product! Be well

  • #3
    I like it. If your older than rain your rock. If you haven't written about the rain, well you haven't written much.

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    • amenOra
      amenOra commented
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      Like the quote by someone I now forget the name of, talking about "Poets write too much on the weather." Sad to say, kinda right. lol Maybe it's all we write about.
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