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    I, the bare branch of the tree
    Parasites and pests waging wars
    Always and forever; eating at me

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    I like the "introduction" sentence, crisp, draws me in, and the second one gives me some tone/value of feeling... Last line is sort of humorous, hinted at. Eating at a bare branch I am.
    This makes me think, for sure. Like, I'm wondering what to associate it with; had ideas of the Tree of life... the squirrel who sews mischief from top to bottom at the roots.
    Thank you for sharing, Bison! Take care

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    • #3
      Nice job Bison.

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