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  • Cruciform

    Cruciform.
    A milk sun,
    by the day
    it's shadows barely worn
    and by night the moon,
    in rifted sky,
    finds its own
    Gethsemane

  • #2
    Creative - and gorgeous at the same time - bringing beauty out of the bearing form. I like it!

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    • #3
      Hi RLW I am shunting
      a lot of time into reading
      and creative writing exercises
      which only leaves space for snippets like this.
      I guess, if winter has left you, you'll be toiling farmward.

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      • #4
        A great little snippet though - enjoyable and not a word wasted

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        • #5
          Thanks Pp. The title was a late addition when I saw the lines could be structured thus and it suggested Constantine's vision (According to Eusebius, Constantine saw a vision of a cross rather than the letters of Christ. “He saw with his own eyes the trophy of a cross of light in the heavens, above the sun, and bearing the inscription, CONQUER BY THIS) and perhaps appropriate to the day

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