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  • Dancing with your touch

    Had I wings to fly, I’d soar through the sky

    Deep into your heart, dancing with your touch

    Into the breeze and rhythm of your life

    With all my might, your love I’d gently Clutch

    Like carefree children we would laugh and play

    Spend every moment sharing our true selves

    For our love would always find a way

    To overcome problems, sadness dispel

    You dear have become my necessity

    my eyes have become accustomed to you

    The smile on your lips is my ecstasy

    You make my life completely whole and new

  • #2
    This is a Lovely piece anyway! . . . But that last stanza is magnificent!!!!!!!! Yet another well executed piece!!!! Well done AtL!


    • #3
      Ahhh AmenOra - Now you got ME feeling quite "whole and new" again with this enchanting creation reminding me of dancing with a special someone's touch a long, long time ago. I remember because the Pyramids had just been built, Moses had parted the Red Sea and my new sandals had gotten soggy wet. about your good times! LOL. Definitely enjoyed your work here AO and thanks for the memories. Namyh


      • AlexandratheLate
        AlexandratheLate commented
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        Thank you very much Namyh for such a nice comment. Alexandra

    • #4
      Your light touch and smooth style make this a joyful ride. Thank you


      • #5
        Thank you very much Jon.


        • #6
          Your deft touch with words floats this one to the top drawer, AtL! Just lovely.


          • #7
            Thank you very much Paula.


            • #8
              Thank you very much Mutaddo.