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  • Muddy Me

    Muddy Me

    (a Ha'sonnet inspired by other poets in the forum...and the weather)



    Melting snowfall

    Upped by raindrops

    Down-dropped spring call

    Deep’ning car stops

    Yet we press on

    Moaning mud spawn

    Each track - tugs back

    W&R Driveway.JPG

  • #2
    Hosanna, Hosanna, Ha’sonnet in the Highest.
    Aaaaand, acrostic too! Nice Paula!

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks Bobby. I haven't written in this form in a long time - wanted to see if I could still do it.

  • #3
    I love the pic and your poem sets it off.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks AtL. My sister said that when my brother in law got home from work today he made it up the driveway, but couldn't get into the garage, because of the mud. And it's supposed to rain tonight and tomorrow night as well. We're wondering when the water will end.
      Last edited by RhymeLovingWriter; 03-13-2019, 01:39 PM.

  • #4
    Lovely Photo

    A stream, a lane.
    From daily rain
    oozes that bane,
    mud puddles strain
    bucolic gain
    till summer sun
    dries up the slop

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      This is actually my sister's driveway. We're both ready for some drying to happen soon.

      Creative response BTW. I like it!
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