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    WHEN WE FELL

    When we fell
    Was the pain the same?
    Was it dark or day?
    Circle or square
    Was anyone there?
    To lower a flag
    Smooth a face on a pole?
    Erase a line in the sand?
    With their forgiving hand
    A peaceful mind
    A heart that was kind
    Or were you the one
    Saying, lets not behave
    Nothing here for any of us
    Left really to save

    RDS
    THE SECOND




  • #2
    Wow, TS! I've read this multiple times, and a different layer reveals itself each time. Wonderful!

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    • #3
      I agree with Muttado1sb . This could take on several interpretations TS, as you turn the words in relation to personal experiences. I like when a poem does that!

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      • #4
        I got the same feeling TS - I’ve read it several times and it means something different each time.

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