A good question

[amenOra]

it is
the way the voice
stops:
I try explaining
this longing for
her
as the sun
blood rocks
screams
get in our way
as
eroding waves
eat the land
eat the sky
and my heart
as i empty
my lungs
as i fall down
to the bottom
as my ribs
crack open
and my spine
fills up
and i hear
water dripping
from
the rusty
broken pipe
of my dreams
like music
like rain...

who is
underwater
now?

[Namyh]

AmenOra - This was for me hypnotic to the end. I believe you captured a little of what's inside all of us, at one time or another. It was that first line that grabbed me - "it is the way the voice stops:". After that, I was hooked. Very good work AO and I enjoyed. Namyh