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    it is
    the way the voice
    stops:
    I try explaining
    this longing for
    her
    as the sun
    blood rocks
    screams
    get in our way
    as
    eroding waves
    eat the land
    eat the sky
    and my heart
    as i empty
    my lungs
    as i fall down
    to the bottom
    as my ribs
    crack open
    and my spine
    fills up
    and i hear
    water dripping
    from
    the rusty
    broken pipe
    of my dreams
    like music
    like rain...

    who is
    underwater
    now?
    Last edited by amenOra; 02-28-2019, 03:18 AM.

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    AmenOra - This was for me hypnotic to the end. I believe you captured a little of what's inside all of us, at one time or another. It was that first line that grabbed me - "it is the way the voice stops:". After that, I was hooked. Very good work AO and I enjoyed. Namyh

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