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  • Things That Get Lost

    Tonight's sky
    narrated and chandaliered by
    that white kraft paper circle
    and the carte blanche sadness
    that unchurches

    the collection of tiny wishes
    and their uncontainable joy
    the fresh glass of champagne
    the iambic moonbeat
    background jazz for water dancing

    the stars that see us
    upto our eyelashes in wishes
    and hear us
    upto our throats in toasts
    watch over our vigour
    and blurry halos
    Last edited by lunar glide; 01-29-2019, 09:30 AM.

  • #2
    You have such a way of making these observations romantic and beautiful - like a state of dream.

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      lunar glide commented
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      Thank you for the beautiful compliment!

  • #3
    Wow, so lovely thank you. I was completely captivated by the last stanza, and the beginning just built up to that - a delight. Peace and Kudos Friend!

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      lunar glide commented
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      Im happy you commented because the ending is the most difficult for me always and im never sure!

  • #4
    “Up to our eyelashes in wishes”

    Does this equate to having a gut feeling

    Some interesting line here

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      Thank you divot! Yes a gut feeling is an interesting phrase. . not unrelated. I appreciate you reading and commenting.

  • #5
    Oh so wonderful LG - this delicious capture of heaven inspired moment!

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      lunar glide commented
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      Thank you RLW, i was inspired ! Glad you read it.

  • #6
    No longer lost in the “Sea of Statuses” Top of the queue LG!

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      Thank you Bobby!

  • #7
    The loveliness of a moment captured beautifully, lg! Just wonderful!

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      I Appreciate that Muttado😁
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