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    WINTER’S KISS

    Spider webs of a September’s groom’s hurry
    Now waft on the threshold of January’s door
    The smoky romance of the city street
    I feel within my being no more
    The crack of every walk I’ve tread
    Hides it leaf beneath a frozen tide
    Hallowed be the winter’s kiss
    Laid upon my waiting springtime bride

    RDS
    THE SECOND



  • #2
    Very, Very nice! Very well done The second!

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    • The second
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      Thank you very, very much writer friend

  • #3
    A cold kiss indeed. a romance somewhat frosty. Yet the writing is on fire.

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    • #4
      This holds an intricate balance - like the alluded web of its inception - looking forward (that's the part I appreciate the most). Beautiful TS.

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      • #5
        Quite beautiful TS.

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