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    no heebie jeebie moss as you were 11.01.19



    loving fourteen

    even if day behind

    burberry set the scene

    explaining nerves and honesty is kind.

    interesting to hear about lens

    along time in the game

    no nerves in white light just tens

    oh my god jesus to a child flame.

    once the first click

    on confidence kate is chewing

    selling any product is this heroin chic

    she knows exactly what she is doing.

    no heebie or jeebie or snigger

    in control with no nerves to linger

    the character playing you did father figure

    delivering to love magazine a interview stinger.

    going to end in smoke

    round the best village it will stir

    hope i don't get throttled or a choke

    poetry and news is as you were.

    https://ibb.co/cvPnCg2

  • #2
    nice, i thought this had a sweet flow-- and got more of background after checking out the attached pic.
    i love the inverted syntax you employ in your stuff, as well as the rhymes, hard-hitting. peace!

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    • #3
      thank you for kind words amenora and thank you for reading.

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