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    Don't worry, my love, tonight;
    The stars are ampler hued lamps shining.
    The day's gone by and revealed you.

    As lost as ever, walking streets
    Let the air have you;
    Don't worry my love tonight.

    A broken smile hanging there;
    Angels learn the secret music.
    The day's gone by and revealed you.

    Black as smoke, blue
    As smoke, silvery stream through us,
    Don't worry, my love, tonight.

    As the senses refreshed can clear
    The voice left in the air
    The day's gone by and revealed you.

    Like some invisible string to pull
    As if your ear were tuned to hear:
    Don't worry, my love tonight,
    The days go by and they reveal you.

  • #2
    how sweet. loved references to stars and lamps shinning. strong poetry and light not fading even if many days go by. great write.

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    • amenOra
      amenOra commented
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      i try to identify with that which
      after all the days are done
      still is able to shine

      thanks for commenting

  • #3
    A very cosmic love poem! Very well done amenOra

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    • amenOra
      amenOra commented
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      To the stars! Thanks, thanks. I appreciate it Rhymeboy

  • #4
    Umami
    ampler hued lamps
    The taste of phrase
    on tongue
    Strong suit
    bears fruit

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    • amenOra
      amenOra commented
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      Yeah, something about that, I enjoy too. thanks for the comment
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