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  • Star Bright

    The star shown above me
    struggling to be seen
    beyond the bright
    city light
    But I saw it
    and made a wish
    even though
    I didn’t know
    if it was a wishing star

  • #2
    felt a bit of desperation from this poetry like you are reaching out for some help. maybe going to deep ?

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thanks for the perspective, poemzone! It’s just about wishing on a star. Any depth is accidental. :-)

  • #3
    I liked it. It reminded me of when we were children and would be outside with cousins, with mini-competitions to find the first star so we could make a wish!

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thanks, RLW! I had similar occasions when I was young, though more with friends.

  • #4
    Heaven's Gate

    Distracted from its boundless depths
    overwhelmed by City Lights
    made endless day
    from endless night

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you, Johntee! Your title made me think of the religious cult that committed mass suicide in the 90s to board the spceship following the Hale-Bopp comet.

  • #5
    This reminded how as children we were imaginary explorers traversing the skies.

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thank you, AtL! Childhood wishes and dreams are usually good memories, and yours sounds like it was, so I’m happy to have reminded you of it.
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