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    The first snowfall of winter
    might be the most beautiful time of the year
    when outside is the sound of silent water
    and the caprices of the stars are gone with summer

    when sharp edges of everything
    stop bristling
    and await peace
    aided by the down of the moon
    falling gently floating
    duplicating stars
    softly erasing what we want
    touching us with joy
    that cannot be postponed
    the sensation
    all is motionless except for heaven
    heaven tickling us
    chasing us inside...

    Last edited by lunar glide; 12-12-2018, 11:35 AM.

  • #2
    In the moment
    there is no long run
    unknowing what is to come
    let the snow fall on

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    • lunar glide
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      Thank you Johntee!

  • #3
    loved heaven and tickling us and chasing us. great lines to poetry and snow was sent by the ruler of heaven,

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    • lunar glide
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      Im glad you enjoyee poemzone 😁

  • #4
    Loved this! There is a 'gentle loveliness' about this piece! It has a wonderful relaxing quality! It is a wonderful piece to read just before bedtime after a busy exhausting day! Well done lunar glide!

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    • #5
      Thank you Rhymeboy! I appreciate the comment

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      • #6
        Very cool poem!

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        • lunar glide
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          Thank you! I appreciate the visit!

      • #7
        Lovely.

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        • #8
          Thank you!

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          • #9
            I like this- so smooth it glides

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            • lunar glide
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              Lol thank you 😁

          • #10
            A lovely capture of the first snow LG.

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            • lunar glide
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              Thank you RLW. I appreciate it
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